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LIFE - Its not always sunshine and rainbows

by amity_007 (writer), Delhi, India, August 30, 2013

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dismayed, waiting for d dark clouds to get clear...

Nah... You won't find any hope, any inspiration in it.. Just some jumbled up thoughts and feelings I have put together.. Ya, life can be hard like such sometimes..

So here I am now,

alone and depressed;

lost in this struggles of life,

inextricably entangled up,

in troubles and strife..


Don't know what's happening to me,

feeling like running out of luck,

nothing positive left in me,

life has seriously started to suck..


Now nothing amuses me,

no situation tends to excite,

life is just withering apart,

something has started dying inside..


All i feel now is disgrace and shame,

nowhere else but in me only,

it's getting stronger day by day,

routing to my inner strength slowly..


Mind is wandering around,

filled with despair and dreaded thghts,

its making me harder to breathe, to live,

possible solutions harder to sought..


Among this entwined maze of life's events

it's like every ounce of soul is enervated,

life has lost its purpose, its reasons..,

has gone wrecked, completely devastated...


No ray of hope, believe can be foreseen,

alone I am, left in the lurch;

Never expected this world would feel so mean,

"fate with pain" would be having a merge..


All my world is so empty,

this darkness around me is making me cold,

I feel so alone, so lonely now,

there's no one to understand me, to comfort,

no one to hold...


But still the poker face is on,

it's what all people see, hear,

but they fail to notice the grief running through me,

the crying on inside, the silent tears...


Though my quest is on for a better tomorrow,

It's what I hav been craving for so long,

I just hope, somehow i manage to weather this storm, this sorrow,

before I fall apart, before everythng goes wrong....


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By Shaun Gibson on August 30, 2013 at 09:09 am

So powerful, so honest...

Love it...

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By Barbara MacDonald on August 30, 2013 at 01:29 pm

Shaun is right, this is so very powerful coming straight from your favorite kind of writing...especially in poetry....well done do have talent and it is nice to see ou posting again...also writing can be such a good outlet to process our emotions with, when done in this way...

My blessings are always with you my friend....may you smile knowing that "this too shall pass" and you will be made stronger from it....hugs...

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By Credo on September 08, 2013 at 08:43 pm

Grest poetry, demonstrating the emotions of life..


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By amity_007 on September 11, 2013 at 12:36 pm

Thanks Shaun... Happy to know that :)

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By amity_007 on September 11, 2013 at 12:40 pm

Thanks Barb... :)thanks for appreciating ... Good to know you loved it.. Made my day :)

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By amity_007 on September 11, 2013 at 12:40 pm

Thank You Credo... :)

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By Barbara MacDonald on September 11, 2013 at 03:15 pm

Keep writing my friend...take care. :D

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