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Sweet Talker

by mantra lotus (writer), St. Louis, Mo, June 23, 2011

Credit: Hershey Foods Corporation
Mr. Goodbar Chocolate Candy Bars ( King Size Box)

Candy Words, Honey Coated, and Sugar Sprinkled. (Yummy)

Peppermint tongue with a Red Hot tip

Wet Liquorice lips

Cotton Candy breath and Sugar Daddy words

He's a Sweet Talker

Strutting his Fifth Avenue walk

Spitting his Juicy Fruit talk

Flashing Charms on his Hershey wrists and golden Ring Pops on his Hot Tamale fingers

Pixie Stix, Jolly Ranchers and Life Savers bustle in his trousers

He's a Sweet Talker

He said his name was Carmello and flexed his Hundred Grand chest

Twinkling his Laffy Taffy smile

Winking , with his Cookies n' Cream eye

Offering me a line of Jaw Breakers, Whoppers, and Bazookas

Blowing me Starburst kisses and dropping Pop Rocks in my ear

"Who does this Wachamacallit think I am? He must think I'm a Air Head, Lemon Head or Dum Dum!?"

I hold up my hand and say "Hey! Nutty Buddy, Take5!" I'm not into all these Jujubes, Jelly Belly's, and Tootsie Rolls. Peace out Mike & Ike" and I turn to walk a way.

Sweetly he stopped me, "Wait Buttercup, please? My bad.. Dove, I mean.. (Rambling over his words)...I'm sorry for acting like a Junior Mint or Milk Dud. It's just that you got me all Twizzled up and my legs are like Gummy Worms. He softly proclaimed..."I just wanna be your Wonka Bar."

"Awww"..I turn to face him. His cheeks were like Haribo Twin Cherries. His face was pure like a Milky Way. He held in front of me; his assortment of chocolates in a heart-shaped box. "I think I know what you like" he said.. and with his Butterfinger he fed me my favorite.. Chocolate Turtles.. (Yummy)

He's A Sweet Talker..But I like him.



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8 comments on Sweet Talker

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By Credo on June 23, 2011 at 11:24 am

I don't know, but....... is this sexual or what? What would you rate this article P.G. (Parental Guidance) or X rated.

Candy never struck me quite so sensual as this poem seems to imply. In any event this was a respectable yet sensual article for adults that anyone could read.

Enjoyed the emotional contrast within the article.

Credo

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By mantra lotus on June 23, 2011 at 01:33 pm

I see we have some Naughty..Naughy thinkers in the group. I love it!!!

Cher..after writing this..I admit, I went a bit overboard on the chocolate (no pun intended YOU juicy thinkers (Credo and Jen and Tonic)..lol.

Credo..I would say this one would probably rate PG 13. Just like the kids movies of today..Hidden sexual innuendos for the Adults!

Funny :-)!! Jen and Tonic..go ahead..I won't tell.

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By Caballero_69 on June 23, 2011 at 02:03 pm

Mantra,

This is Nutrageous!

You a marvelous, Sweet Tart, of a writer.

As such, you are alwaysmake me Twirl Twix Zero frowns and a thousand Snickers!

SKOR another dazzler for you!

Larry

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By 'Mean' Mike Duffau on June 23, 2011 at 02:13 pm

pure genius...how do you do it? i dig the play on words...

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By mantra lotus on June 23, 2011 at 03:02 pm

My Pleasure Larry and Mike.

Yes..patting myself on the back..I am pretty Nutrageous..:)

Thanks Gents.

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By mantra lotus on June 23, 2011 at 03:05 pm

Yeah!!! Yippee! Melody. I'm glad you like this one. I wasn't too sure about it..I thought it might be a bit cheesy..Glad to know it's the right kind of cheese..:)

You guys make me so Happy!!!!

(Oh.."Mantra Rose" I like..I thought it was a cutesy nick name from you for me. I'll take it.

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By mantra lotus on June 23, 2011 at 06:55 pm

Wow..you are bringing everything to my attention..Dang it..I forgot the PayDay..too. LOL. :)

Thanks Life Riddles

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By mantra lotus on June 24, 2011 at 10:47 am

Thank you Fellow Flyers...Garry and TJ!! I'm glad you like the candy..lol

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