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Sleep!

by Jack Bates (writer), Alameda, April 11, 2011

Credit: Jack Bates
My wonderful son about 9 months old posing as a peaceful angel

My lyrical lamentation of our need to sleep. I need a 30 hour day, not a 18 hour one!

What is the use?
Oh how I lament this need!
We need more hours
Not less!
This robber of ours
Steals our moments
By silent slumber
Not so silent snoring
Boring Boring BORING!



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By Angie Alaniz on April 12, 2011 at 01:24 am

I wish there was longer days as well.

Might help me sleep better to.

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By -YumnaU. on April 12, 2011 at 03:43 am

Whoa, how can someone lament sleeping? Bet its frustation and nothing else. Sleeping is divine.

ps. Your son is very cute :)

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By BusinessLife on April 12, 2011 at 06:39 pm

What a priceless treasure of a photo. :) Sleep...there's never enough time and also, once we have slept, never enough time to complete all we have missed because of lost hours sleeping.

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By Theresa H Hall on April 14, 2011 at 11:35 pm

He is perfect! Oh happy Daddy, to have a son such as he.

I'd like to recommend my favorite book title:

"The Prophet" 1923

written by: Kahlil Gibran (artist and writer)

Page 17.

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By Frank - icare2be on April 17, 2011 at 03:33 pm

@Jack - Ah yes I remember the days of lack of sleep. Yet, ever hour of sleep lost was worth the joy. I believe you will find the same to be true of your handsome son. He is a beautiful baby. He is worth every moment of shared wakefulness.

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By Jack Bates on April 20, 2011 at 02:21 pm

@Theresa, I have a very well worn and well read copy of The Prophet. I read it to him sometimes.

Thanks for all the feedback and compliments on my boy. He is 4 now and I have a 1 yr old girl. I just like how his photo fit the topic :-)

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