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Cloudy

by -YumnaU. (writer), Karachi, April 04, 2011

Hence let it boil itself to steam in me. As I will be as fine as I have ever been!

Nothing can unleash the frustation jailed inside.

At least for now stop trying to make me decide.

This cloud of anger must burst on you.

The effects of which I'll have to suffer.

Hence let it boil itself to steam in me.

As I will be as fine as I have ever been!



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By 'Mean' Mike Duffau on April 04, 2011 at 02:06 pm

i have to unleash whats jailed within me, or itll destroy me...

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By 'Mean' Mike Duffau on April 04, 2011 at 02:06 pm

i have to unleash whats jailed within me, or itll destroy me...

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By Frank - icare2be on April 04, 2011 at 05:37 pm

@Yumnau - I admire your strength of character if this poem is a reflection of something happening in your life. No one should be subject to mental or physical abuse. Please take care of yourself. I have learned emotions that I push down inside always pop out somewhere or sometime.

Yes, you can see your poem struck a cord of empathy.

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By -YumnaU. on April 05, 2011 at 10:56 am

@Cher, thank you :)

@ Mike: I go through those moments too, when you reach your saturation point, it just leaks out automatically!

@Frank: I get you and respect your concern :) thank you for you wonderful comments!

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