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Monday, November 20, 2017

Oh Bartender

Credit: J.R. Bracelly
This little fellow is perched above the bar at a local watering hole

~ An Ode to the Bartender~ ................................................................

Oh Mr. Oh-so-bad for me
I sip this tasty drink you made for me
oh so effortlessly I slip into a tipsy state; my vision blurred by the liquid encouragement
coarsing through my veins.

I'll take the reins & drive myself crazy
with the would I, should I and maybes.

Oh baby shake me like that drink you just made me; perhaps I'll just shake it and make you take me to places I dare
not think of...

I think I'll just take another drink of this sweet libation, I feel this
vibration is far too much for me to ignore. That's another point for you but who's keeping
score in this game of pussycat and mouse?

I'm going back to my house to think about all those things I'm glad I didn't do to you.



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By D'Ann Redondo on November 30, 2010 at 12:27 pm

Nice (last) call.

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By Frank - icare2be on December 04, 2010 at 03:16 pm

As a bartender in another life. I have heard similar words from across the bar. Although, I like your poetry version much better. Last Call.... cute....

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By -YumnaU. on December 08, 2010 at 09:42 pm

"I'll take the reins & drive myself crazy
with the would I, should I and maybes." Loved this part the most :) Entertaining poetry/

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By taking off the mask on December 09, 2010 at 12:55 am

haha i love it!

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By 'Mean' Mike Duffau on December 09, 2010 at 08:32 am

let me buy you a drink and take it from there...

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