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Love-Dug

by SZU (writer), Karachi (Pakistan), November 28, 2010

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Someone who is love-dug and knows!

6 feet underground, I am love-dug, my head spins round and round ,I am love-dug!

6 feet underground

I am love-dug

my head spins round and round

I am love-dug

Trap is my soul here,

my body's up there,

my pain's shining bright,

but my ego's uptight!

I am proud of myself

for not exhibiting on a shelf,

the scar that ne'er heals,

the torture that ne'er kneals,

my love got me down

and now I hear no sound

Cuz..

6 feet underground

I am love-dug

my head spins round and round

I am love-dug

Up in the sky there's a thunder,

yet my body's not ready to surrender,

neither it moves nor it budges,

but it holds a thousand grudges.

Yet I don't want you to feel,

how it's like to be hurt in real.

And I don't want you to bring,

yourself to a state where you sing...

6 feet underground

I am love-dug

my head spins round and round

I am love-dug!



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4 comments on Love-Dug

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By -YumnaU. on November 29, 2010 at 07:21 am

really like it. A mixture of feelings. It's difficult to cope up with. But time makes you.

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By BusinessLife on November 30, 2010 at 06:16 pm

I agree with askcherlock. :) Nice.

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By Barkha Dhar on December 26, 2010 at 12:20 pm

Ummh!I can taste the honey of your soul....for you are so love dug. Perhaps your love is the amazing force that's holding you bright even 6 feet under. Loved your beautiful song!

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By SZU on January 02, 2011 at 11:56 pm

Yumna- that's right, time is indeed the best of pillls!

Cher and Businesslife- really? in that case I think I should pay a visit to a musician friend of mine! :)

Barkha- thanks a lot! :)

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