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Too Deep

by SZU (writer), Karachi (Pakistan), August 04, 2010

A cry of an individual who has no one around to take care of him/her.

The secrets that I hold inside

Are never to be shared,

The fate that I carry

is forever to be scared,

I have no friends

To hold no hands,

I have no one,

To walk me to the end,

This life is not a foe

neither is it a friend,

mistakes that my luck made

Never can I mend,

Forget that I am human...

Ever, Can I?,

If I fall for it

I'll be a part of this lie,

And Lie is not

what I have learnt to say,

So I'll remember I am alive

For as long as I may,

Alone will I stand

And alone will I sleep,

For this pain is not to be shared

It lies within...too deep



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By SZU on August 04, 2010 at 11:23 am

Thankyou for liking it cher! :)

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By SZU on August 05, 2010 at 09:23 pm

great. Thankyou !

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By Barkha Dhar on August 08, 2010 at 11:22 am

That's great! Your poem actually shares the true meaning of life. 'While being among so many, man still is alone'. Your poem beautifully expresses that veracity.

Barkha Dhar

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By SZU on August 09, 2010 at 12:57 am

thankyou Barkha! :)

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By D. Sager on November 27, 2011 at 10:45 pm

For this pain is not to be shared

It lies within...too deep

my sentiments exactly. Trying to share it is exhausting and unsatisfying. well done.

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