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Michelangelo

by Julian Gallo (writer), July 23, 2010

The Uncertainties, the Insecurities, the Fear of The Unknown....

I would build you a glorious palace
with ornamental roads and
wondrous sculptures if I could
but I only have these two clumsy hands
to work with.

They are the best I have to offer you
but these hands would work wonders
if given the chance.
The trouble is, I don't really

know if I should have that chance.
Sometimes you have to do the best with
what you have to work with
and these hands may actually destroy

the very thing they are trying to make so
beautiful for you.



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By alan handwerger on July 23, 2010 at 12:21 pm

Trust your hand. They seem to be attached to a gifted mind.

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By Askcherlock on July 23, 2010 at 05:08 pm

This is such a touching and heartfelt poem, Julian. Someone out there is very fortunate.

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By Julian Gallo on July 23, 2010 at 07:10 pm

Thank you Alan!

Thank you Cher!

Your comments mean a lot. :-)

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By Melody J Haislip on July 23, 2010 at 08:55 pm

Love can make you feel humble. I think your heart could make up for any lack in your hands.

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By Julian Gallo on July 23, 2010 at 08:59 pm

Thank you, Melody ;-)

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By Theresa H Hall on July 23, 2010 at 10:43 pm

I often wondered how he sculpted. Those marble gifts he left us. Could he have done it (at times), with his eyes closed? There always is the inner voice to direct and guide us. Listen to yours and claim what you desire.

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By Julian Gallo on July 24, 2010 at 06:01 am

I often wondered too, Theresa. Whenever I see any work of his (or any sculptor, for that matter, classical ones anyway), I am always amazed at the detail and it blows my mind how that was done from a slab of stone. Truly is a very rare ability, I think. Thanks for reading. And thank you. :-)

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By Theresa H Hall on July 24, 2010 at 09:44 am

My pleasure Julian. Sometimes I create something and later I think "Now how did I do this?" It is as if once done I only have to appreciate it, and no longer be concerned with the whys and hows. I will still look at statues or the crucifix and marvel over the workmanship, just as you do. All that matters is the brilliance of artistry is in the physical form for us to see. Lovely day!

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By SZU on July 24, 2010 at 03:02 pm

I agree with melody- the real magic is done by the soul and the heart, if your hands (and/or body) is in sync with it; you can do wonders! :)

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By Devin J Partridge on July 24, 2010 at 08:05 pm

Hey Julian, as a facebook friend your work is more important to me than alot of what I read here, and let me say this was very interesting as I read along.

Sometimes love gives us power in areas we lack,
just as smiles come from others when we frown.

Good note my friend!

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By Julian Gallo on July 25, 2010 at 05:17 pm

Thank you Szu! Thanks Devin!

Szu: Absolutely. :-)

Devin: You've been doing some fantastic work. Keep it up. Looking forward to more. Thanks for reading & commenting.

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