A darkening fog
Clouds my reason
Blurring my vision
Impairs my will
Halting my movement
Knocks my knees
Knowing my loss
I fall
Chest on fire
Feeling the world's
Full weight on
Chest on fire
Panic sets in
Air, need air
No way in
No way out
Fading to black
Help!, I shout
Silent call unheard
Pain becomes distant
Unfelt feeling there
Not here where
I pass out
CREATIVE - POETRY
Credit: Jennie Faber @ Flickr
Photos of a graveyard at midnight that remind me of what I see during an asthma attack

Copyright © 2010 Jack Bates
Asthma Attack
Credit: Jennie Faber @ FlickrPhotos of a graveyard at midnight that remind me of what I see during an asthma attack
My attempt to capture the feeling of an asthma attack with written words

Copyright © 2010 Jack Bates
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I have mild asthma, but nothing like yours. That's terrible, it must feel like dying. In fact it was downright disturbing just reading about it. I have to assume you're on medication, but it doesnss't sound sufficient. Maybe you should try a service animal, one who can go bark at your wife or son when you go down. And, no, I'm not trying to be funny.