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Minimal write: RIGINAL.

by riginal (writer), moe australia, January 20, 2016

Some things are not as the opening scene seems. Stupid humans from either side of the fence.

THE HUNTED. minimal write. RIGINAL.

The Old Elk stood irresolute, its battle-scarred flanks quivered with bleary-eyed resignation. Displaying scant fear it lifted its cumbersome head-ill supported by its sagging body. Gazed at the forest. Sighed. Stared blankly, unflinchingly, at his tormentor.

He took aim, squeezed of a series of rapid shots. Grinned. Too easy. This was America. The weary animal posed again, waiting for the inevitable. Nudged the 'hunter's' pocket with a purposeful antler for the reward. Stupid human. The hunter rubbed his adopted pet's flank, the whispered apology. He rubbed a caring hand across the long forgotten furrow burn from a long forgotten inept hunter. Stupid humans.



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3 comments on Minimal write: RIGINAL.

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By Barbara MacDonald on January 20, 2016 at 02:45 pm

Could you please explain this to me, cause I just am not getting it? Hmmmm...Nice to see a post though, what ever happened to Rot In Hell? :)

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By riginal on January 27, 2016 at 02:46 am

Barbara Mac, you is one very intelligent cookie. Just got your comment my friend. I have been stirring a few people lately, atheists/learned people included...people get upset even when you apologize. Okay girl. "Stupid human 'real hunter' variety, shot at a young Elk. Missed, left a furrow. Felt guilt, adopted the 'flesh wounded' Elk. Felt remorse, pursued big and small game with a camera. "He took aim (camera!) squeezed off a series of rapid shots." The old pet Elk nudged the camera 'hunter's' pocket for its reward. If you contact me requiring any further info i will respond on B Twinkletoes. Guy Thair and Dale Cooper got it, but in saying that all women have twice the intelligence of men. Been a bit going on. Nice pic. My favorite outfit on F. How's you been? Re 'Rot in Hell', it's still rotting. :>)

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By HomeRearedChef on March 25, 2016 at 04:03 pm

I think I got it now, Riginal (in regards to Barbara's question). Thank you for clearing it up. I like it!!!

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