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Acceptance

by Barbara MacDonald (writer), CANADA , August 29, 2013

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Happiness can exist only in acceptance. George Orwell

Acceptance doesn't mean resignation; it means understanding that something is what it is and that there's got to be a way through it.

Straight from the heart

These words said

Somehow they

Appear to be dead

No longer holding

Meaning or worth

Who stole it

A drifting presence

Unknown...

You shall not possess

The unknown

A phantom illusion

Lost in the chaos

A ghost of untruth

No reality...

And so it goes

And so it was

Unwinding the creation

Facing the lose

Scattered beyond

All that was real...

Left on the pavement

Placed with a kiss

Abandoned dreams

Will not subsist

There must be more

To even the score...

It never was a game

Of who would win or lose

When it became that

It was time to choose

Anger and judgement

Shattered the truth...

Copyright © 2012 Barbara MacDonald



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Barbara MacDonald is a writer for BrooWaha. For more information, visit the writer's website.
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By riginal on August 30, 2013 at 12:32 am

That's understandable Barb. You're right there's a way round everything. That's why roundabouts are put in. A roundabout in Australia is a circle plonked in the middle of a road you drive around to get to your destination on another road. Thinking in a roundabout way i guess is similar relatively speaking otherwise we'd all end up just driving and thinking round in circles and with the high cost of petrol compared to the low cost of faith is why it's easier to walk and look on the bright side. Unless of course you are driving a thrifty Ford and you happen to run over a walker staring upwards trying to look on the bright side? Nice post Barb. Cheers and have a great weekend. Do people in your country have the time to walk? Or more importantly do people have the time to talk to other people? :>)

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By amity_007 on August 30, 2013 at 01:14 am

"Anger and judgement

Shattered the truth..."

Barb superbly written. I need not to mention your creativeness here. I believe everybody know tht now..! :) Every tym i read you, it makes me so happy.. Reading the thoughts, the meaning that is beyond a normal mind's undrstanding, u interpret it so nicely .. :)

Missed u here on Broo :)

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By Credo on August 30, 2013 at 01:50 am

For all that we think we know in this life, there are mysteries we shall never uncover. And for everything we proudly learn, we only discover, how much closer to ignorance we have become. It would take more than a life time to learn all there is to know, and several life times to sift through the rubbish to understand it all.

A poem, worth it's weight in wisdom.

Credo

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By Shaun Gibson on August 30, 2013 at 03:55 am

Love it. We will never know all the secrets life holds, and nor should we, I think somethings are best left to guess or to ponder over. If we knew it all, what would we debate? lol

As said above, that is wisdom right there Barbara, a wisdom born out of living. I know the longer I live the more things fit, the more things I heard my Dad say make sense to me now.

Made me think, brilliant Barabara x

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By Barbara MacDonald on August 30, 2013 at 01:09 pm

Yes Riginal, I learned what a roundabout was when I went to Austria, Germany, and Italy....

Yes we certainly do have the time to walk and talk too... and believe or not I can do both at the same time...LOL and chew gum too...

Thank you for your support always my friend, appreciated... and you do make me smile. Have a great weekend...:D behave yoursewlf if you can...lol.

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By Barbara MacDonald on August 30, 2013 at 01:11 pm

Amity...so nice to have you visit and leave your thoughts with me...you have been missed...hope all is well my friend...blessings always...Thank you so much for the comment and review...take care and have a great weekend.

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By Barbara MacDonald on August 30, 2013 at 01:16 pm

Credo, thank you for your encouragement...it really does help to keep us motivated as a writer, Your input matters. I hopefully learn from any comments made.

So happy to see how well received your "debut" poem was received, that is awesome...

The review is also much appreciated. :D

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By Barbara MacDonald on August 30, 2013 at 01:19 pm

Well expressed Shaun... that has to be the one advantage of getting older...we learn so much from all we have lived...is sad when people do not have the ability to grow and learn from their mistakes and stay in a pattern of what is not working towards their best life...

Thank you again my friend. :D

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