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That Evening

by Uttam Gill (writer), BOMBAY(MUMBAI), April 09, 2013

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Life has its unique way to resolve the intricate issues and in the rarity of its wonder, it creates a moment whereby, it revives the passion and that’s what one evening did for him after many years

The years have passed by and the matter of extreme pleasures took a beating; with no alarm, sensual desires retreats to silent burial. The subversive equation of life, took erotic senses as its first casualty. In the disarming calculations of life, he got subtracted to reality of life. Fallen away from the time and self, he drifts into the silence of death and with no passion to reach out to life. Life many a times gives a false sense of convictions too and that’s how, one gets drifted to unknown territory of thoughts, not knowing that, drift is construing a vicious web of complete annihilation of actual man in him. The continuous ingression of crippling inputs mercilessly completes the retardation of the one; who was once so alive…who was once so vibrant…who was once so vigorous. In the complete annihilation, the orchestration of subversive element was so brutal that, no space was left for vitality to breathe.

Life has its unique way to resolve the intricate issues and in the rarity of its wonder, it creates a moment whereby, it revives the passion and that’s how, that evening after many years, life touches the chord to awaken him from the slumber of sedated stance.

Evening was as usual with over cast sky and he felt the comforting presence of the one and to his surprise he also felt the sensuality and its lucid exploration over his body. In the warmth of embrace, he subjects his desires to control the complete orchestration. She whispers.”Hold me” and he does. In the perfect harmony, they indulge with utmost passion and the consummation begins to dance on to the edges. The burning sensuality engulfs for intense rituals to begin. The Invitations make inroads and the core of volcano begins to simmer.

In the perfect harmony, he rediscovers himself and the evening welcomes them with rain. With thunder and shower they celebrate…She delicately plants her kiss on his forehead and says, “My love this rain is too symbolic to indicate the new beginning of yours. You are no more a tutelage of bonded time. Your rejection is over…Let me complete you”…And he sleeps peacefully.



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Uttam Gill is a writer for BrooWaha. For more information, visit the writer's website.
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By Barbara MacDonald on April 09, 2013 at 05:45 pm

This is so beautifully written Uttam, as always. It made me smile because I felt your joy within your words. That is the beauty of life, that often when we are not expecting it, life will resolve itself without our even trying...it is simply grace given to us freely.

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By melanie jean juneau on April 09, 2013 at 07:45 pm

the more I try to control and fix things, the more of a mess I make.

Sometimes when things seem to be falling apart, they really are falling into place

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