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My Love You Are Gone

by Uttam Gill (writer), BOMBAY(MUMBAI), January 04, 2013

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Its about unceremonious parting away of a beloved...

From where you took me, you left

Unrepentantly, you walked away

I wished my hope to rebel against, so as to hold you back

I gathered all my strength to say “Don’t leave my alone”

Your back, drew the big no and feet orchestrated the departure

“Oh! My love...Why? Why? Why you walked away”

With your back towards me, I ceased to exist

Come back my love...look back...Look at your man

Oh! I understood that now you won’t

You walked away with fanfare of arrogance

And I ,your man left alone on that sultry day

You drafted the gloom within me

You are gone for ever

As now, I look towards the distant sky

In the twilight zone of dreams I see my rainbow missing

My love you are gone



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Uttam Gill is a writer for BrooWaha. For more information, visit the writer's website.
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By HomeRearedChef on January 04, 2013 at 07:13 pm

OH, Uttam, this is enough to bring tears down my cheeks. Parting can be such painful sorrow. I can tell you that I would not wish to feel this from my own beloved.

I hope it is alright to say that was beautifully written. :)

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By Barbara MacDonald on January 04, 2013 at 07:17 pm

This did make me cry Uttam, as I never want to think that you are sad or in pain.... love does heal though...hugs

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By Angie Alaniz on January 05, 2013 at 02:29 am

Oh come on....I didn't go any where?

I'm still here :)

Very touching Uttam :D

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