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Make My Dreams come True

by Uttam Gill (writer), BOMBAY(MUMBAI), December 06, 2012

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It's about dream, where in one pray for his beloved to come

Take me in your arms

The story of wait to be concluded

Unwritten notes of my thoughts, can you read

Who knows my longing better then you?

Onto the pages of story, words rejoicing with your thoughts

I am living in the corridors of our comforting dreams

Come now and fetch me the glittering happiness

Come and hold me to create our world

In the breathing space of my dreams, I live

I wonder if there is a dream without you

The dreams communicate and I pray they do

Come, take me in your arms and make my dreams come true.



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Uttam Gill is a writer for BrooWaha. For more information, visit the writer's website.
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By melanie jean juneau on December 06, 2012 at 12:36 pm

powerful, completely original imagesI am living in the corridors of our comforting dreams

In the breathing space of my dreams, I live

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By Barbara MacDonald on December 06, 2012 at 02:34 pm

This is wonderful Uttam...makes me think of a favorite song...Roy Orbison..."In Dreams" ....

May you always have dreams to dream, what would life be without dreams? :-)

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By HomeRearedChef on December 06, 2012 at 05:13 pm

Deat Uttam, this is beautiful, my friend. Wow! What passion and tenderness you have within you. It clearly shows.

By the way, thank you for the video. I only wish my hubby was here so that we could have slow-danced together. :)

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By Angie Alaniz on December 07, 2012 at 10:59 pm

Makes you go awhh

I hope this guys dream comes true other wise its way to sad.

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