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A Musical Point!

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David by MichelAngelo

Music is a higher revelation than all wisdom and philosophy.

Why is it so rare for a man to believe that a woman in love cares to succeed in the little things you do?

Not the masterpiece you yourself feel the need to portray that would be foul play.

Take David by Michelangelo is he such a work of art?

Or was his real masterpiece in his actions love of life and music he sang from his heart!

Like David it’s harmony feeling together complete as one.

The sound brings color its fun and comes easy to the ones who really are open to love.

Nonetheless how complex it must be for the ones who once promised love yet shut the door out of pure fear of falling to deeply in love.

They played the music have their fun but never dared to crescendo with rhythm’s of love.

To fear the feeling that comes so deeply subsequently is like the climax the movement without the extended printed version of what could be seen by others as proof of your love.

Share the beauty of your own lyrics with others. It only gives them ambition to pursue and orchestrate their own symphony of love.

If the timing was right we fell in love at overture before the propositions. So forget the sharps and flats as every good boy does fine the beat can live on.

We can help you orchestrate that great masterpiece if that’s what you need to give to please its fine but really it doesn’t have to be all that!

I take that back, maybe for some but not for the woman in love.

Don’t you see a sonata is all that we need orchestrating our own concerto of love.

Stop searching and trying so hard it’s the little things that are sweet-sounding musical poetry, it flows and completes us it really does.



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Angie Alaniz is an editor for BrooWaha. For more information, visit the writer's website.
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By melanie jean juneau on November 05, 2012 at 01:14 pm

Beautiful, powerful truths

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By Barbara MacDonald on November 05, 2012 at 02:10 pm

This is beautiful Angie, speaks to the poet in my soul...I feel the same way about music and love. So happy you are using your gift and writing more :-) .

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By Angie Alaniz on November 05, 2012 at 02:29 pm

Thank you ladies :D

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By Uttam Gill on November 05, 2012 at 08:32 pm

Wow! What a classic piece of writing...In your absolute symphony of thoughts I pick up the musical note and see a beautiful soul. A soul which is so complete but yet wishes to be complete more and that’s how you extend your corridors in your writing…Angie you said it so well…Keep it up…

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By Angie Alaniz on November 05, 2012 at 08:41 pm

Thanks Uttam for your support. One day I hope to grow up and write like you. ; )

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By HomeRearedChef on December 01, 2012 at 04:17 pm

Angie, I, too, dream of being a writer, and a singer and dancer. Alas it is not meant for me to be. :)

This post, pure musical poetry, I would set to read to music, to Rimsky-Korsakov's Scheherazade. ~Virginia

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