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What Am I?

by Angie Alaniz (editor), San Antonio, Texas, October 23, 2012

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What am I?

A riddle a poem a question needing answering.

Specular reflections of visible light, who came up with this device?

Reflecting identity can sometimes have our own contorted expression our image can be grimace obscenity.

It can easily effect our own persona how fair is that?

Who’s twisted vivid idea came up with that?

It seems so unfair just to glare when I’m bare standing in front of you.

Observation bounces off so fast we put ourselves on probation to avoid our own litigation.

Even so the fact remains indeed it’s guaranteed women alone adore you.

A queen, a princes, a mother a whore would fight to keep you right behind their door.

What am I?



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Angie Alaniz is an editor for BrooWaha. For more information, visit the writer's website.
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By darinlhammond on October 24, 2012 at 03:38 pm

A mirror ... Not sure. Like your language in this Angie. It sure is enjoyable seeing your creativity and thoughts. Keep them coming!

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By Angie Alaniz on October 24, 2012 at 04:09 pm

YES :)

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By Uttam Gill on October 24, 2012 at 09:17 pm

“Observation bounces off so fast we put ourselves on probation to avoid our own litigation…” marvelous…to say the least, you have excelled while accepting the truth and; even in perplexity you question about yourself, “Who I Am”…Angie I see in you a great poet but more then that an honest lady, who holds the courage to say things as it is…I am just wondering how many have the courage to say so…Angie this is an outstanding poem…Keep it up…

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By TonyBerkman on October 25, 2012 at 03:48 am

She never fails to amaze me!

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By Angie Alaniz on October 25, 2012 at 04:07 am

Ah thank you Uttam, you are cake in my eyes ;)

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By Angie Alaniz on October 25, 2012 at 04:09 am

And Tony, you are PI!

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By Rum-Punch Drunk on November 13, 2012 at 08:18 am

Loved the way you put this poem together AngieA. I really liked "....women alone adores you" great sentence and it put a smile on my face.

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By Angie Alaniz on December 07, 2012 at 11:14 pm

Thanks Rum-Punch and I smiled just now knowing you smiled :)

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By melanie jean juneau on December 07, 2012 at 11:21 pm

Of course it is a mirror but what wonderful language and rhthym

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By Angie Alaniz on December 07, 2012 at 11:26 pm

hahaha you made me laugh lol

Thank you m09

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By melanie jean juneau on December 07, 2012 at 11:39 pm

So it isn't a mirror and you have duped me?

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By Angie Alaniz on December 08, 2012 at 12:39 am

What? YES you are right it is a mirror.

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