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Tender Words

by Barbara MacDonald (writer), CANADA , September 25, 2012

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Written in five minutes...seems my romantic heart still lives...





Words so tender

They melt in my heart

No matter what happens

It is never torn apart

Taking on a life of it's own

Beyond and above anything

We have ever known...

So now we are here

What shall we do

Surrender to it

Or walk away blue

You do my leave

Neither do I

Somehow it's written

Into the sky

Looking with stars in our eyes

At times making us both cry

Why is this real

Shall we both heal

Remembering a purpose

Of unknown appeal

"I think I'll just worry about this tomorrow..."

"Refusing to live in any sorrow..."

Copyright © 2012 Barbara MacDonald



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Barbara MacDonald is a writer for BrooWaha. For more information, visit the writer's website.
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By melanie jean juneau on September 25, 2012 at 01:33 pm

striking phrase-"Remembering a purpose/ Of unknown appeal "

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By Barbara MacDonald on September 25, 2012 at 03:46 pm

Thank you MO9...poetry truly is my first love...a seed planted that has be be given birth to...:-)

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By Barbara MacDonald on September 25, 2012 at 07:47 pm

You do my leave...read as You do not leave....could one of the editor's edit this please...sorry...

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By Uttam Gill on September 27, 2012 at 09:27 pm

From a tender heart tender words flow...That’s your strength and that’s how you so passionately you could pen down this poem...Keep this passion alive…Beautiful poem Barb...

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