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Love At First Sight

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Love at first sight!

“Who ever loved that loved not at first sight?” ~Christoper Marlowe

There he stood staring back at me a look so deep it enticed me.

Shy at first I turned and looked away.

Who was he to do this to me?

What the hell am I thinking no time to debate.

I liked it of course he was so attractive.
I must be proactive.
I must turn around once more where he stood.

As I glanced the room entranced quickly drawing him near.
So fast in fact I took a step back..."ouch" ...and just like that ... there he stood over me.

“Checkmate my dear” he whispered in my ear.
“No hunt is needed not now or ever it’s meant as a present for us".

A captured chick awaiting the fox, I thought?

Perhaps? This trap might collapse I gasped.
I better take cover from this would be lover.

Before I could think his hand reached for mine.
Romance quickly danced and played entwined so refined in my mind.

His unshaved skin softly gazed around my chin he whispered and deeply said: “Every star needs a sky, it’s no wonder I finally found mine in your eyes”.

Escape?
Absurd!
Too late!!
I took the bait!
His sexual apple was blamefully mine.

Sought out?
No, I was caught!

“Heroism my dear its crystal clear come take me in have no fear.”

I suppose I should propose the night is young lets take it slow?

Who am I kidding he started kissing
Oh wait…. you missed a spot!

Oh my maestro I’m heading towards the sphere on which celestial bodies appear.
Oh and the stars? I see them; seven to be exact.
He smiled, "only seven"? he asked.
Well... lets not forget sevens the most perfect number in heaven.
We both laughed.

It wasn’t just love it was fun,
we both needed that.

Love at first sight a moment in time,
Sometimes it's just right!



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Angie Alaniz is an editor for BrooWaha. For more information, visit the writer's website.
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By melanie jean juneau on September 22, 2012 at 08:44 pm

great writing, you drew me right in

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By Angie Alaniz on September 22, 2012 at 09:06 pm

Thanks so mucy Mo9 :)

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By Uttam Gill on September 22, 2012 at 09:42 pm

So eloquently you have summed up the delicacy of intimate moments…even the impressionable guilt in these words Escape?Absurd!Too late!!I took the bait!His sexual apple was blamefully mine” could not contain the ink to flow towards heavenly surrender…You have weaved the moments of love so beautifully…Angie it’s a master a piece…an outstanding poem…

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By Angie Alaniz on September 22, 2012 at 09:46 pm

Uttam, Thank you for making me totally smile. :D

SO happy you liked it! Coming from you I am very honored.

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By Barbara MacDonald on September 22, 2012 at 09:54 pm

I agree with Uttam, is a great creation and poem...beautifully expressed ...and yes it made me smile also.

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By Angie Alaniz on September 22, 2012 at 09:57 pm

Thanks Barb :)

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By Anastasia on September 23, 2012 at 05:38 pm

Love is clearly in the air. :-)

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By Angie Alaniz on September 23, 2012 at 07:28 pm

;)

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By Randy Mitchell on September 24, 2012 at 01:22 pm

Very nice. Love is a beautiful thing...

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By Angie Alaniz on September 24, 2012 at 05:41 pm

Thanks Randy

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By Cherry4 on October 19, 2012 at 08:36 pm

Beautiful piece and very well written. I was drawn into this from my phone.

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