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Who can take the place of you

by Betty B. (writer), Bucyrus, July 13, 2012

Who can take the place of you Who can comfort the way you do

Who can take the place of you
Who can comfort the way you do
Not one can take my pain inside my soul
not one can help me see things through

Who can take the place of you
not one can do the things you do
not one can love me with pure love

Who can take the place of you
not one can do the things you do
oh how I long for thy will to be done

Oh how I long to see the rivers flow
from you to me deep in my soul

Who can take the place of you
not one can do the things you do
your love is deeper than the ocean
your love is pure and white
so divine inside my heart
so clean inside my mind so wide

Who can take the place of you
not one,not one can touch my mind so deep
not one can do the things you do.

Who can take the place of you
not one can do the things you do.

Written by:©Betty Bolden
10-11-04
All poems are copyright!©



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Betty B. is a writer for BrooWaha. For more information, visit the writer's website.
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2 comments on Who can take the place of you

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By Uttam Gill on July 14, 2012 at 10:51 am

Betty so beautifully written...Seeing your post after long time...Always enjoy reading your post...Keep it up Betty

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By Credo on March 12, 2013 at 05:14 am

A well written article, a poetic psalms, rememnesent of the "Songs of Solomon", a love song to the Lord.

it was a pleasure to read, and by reading it I felt apart of it somehow. Divine work!

Credo

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