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Unfinished Poems

by Inmyredhead (writer), A beautiful west coast place., February 03, 2012

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Like a bud frozen in time...

Sometimes everything has already been said. Sometimes the best idea clings to the inside of my head.

Like the ticking of the clock, there is noise in the silence of this writer's block.

It's not for lack of something to share: I've too many thoughts jammed up in there.

My mind a clogged up pipe, with feelings and emotions fruitful and ripe.

All ready to take their turn, running in place they smolder and burn.

The paper is too white...

The light is too bright...

The lines are too abundant...

The words too common and redundant...

Sometimes everything has already been said. Sometimes the best idea clings to the inside of my head.

Getting started only means hitting a wall. Incomplete and wayward, the thoughts crawl.

My urge to be creative lies in unrealized fruition. No pointed bullets, no ammunition.

Wasted pages of half hearted expression. Is it the result or the cause of an impending depression?

I look back on them sometimes and see; the sad state of what was almost set free.

Never to be resolved; just left unfinished. You can't go back and relight a fire now diminished.

Like a bud frozen in time...

Like a moment never to find it's prime...

Like a life taken too soon; before it has found it's reason.

An unfinished poem is like a flower with no season.



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By amity_007 on February 04, 2012 at 12:24 am

now...

You have really entered 'In My Head' and heart..!!!

Brilliant!! Sheer awesome-ness showed here...

KUDOS..!!!

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By Marcy Lynne on February 04, 2012 at 07:08 am

Perhaps all those unfinished poems were just the prelude to these inspired lines. If so, then they have fulfilled their purpose after all. I love this. And I understand it. "I look back on them sometimes and see; the sad state of what was almost set free."

I have folders full of those myself! Really good work.

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By Inmyredhead on February 04, 2012 at 04:57 pm

Wow...Thank you from the bottom of my heart, Amity and Marcy! Your words are so gracious!

'...they have fufilled their purpose afterall.' That really makes sense! And makes it so much easier to ignore the frustration of seeing them littering my notebooks.

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By Uttam Gill on February 10, 2012 at 11:39 pm

"An unfinished poem is like a flower with no season"...marvellous...This is the heart of a poet...so tender, so delicate, so passionate..."My urge to be creative lies in unrealized fruition..." let this insatiable urge be there always in you...In that I see creative blend of your soul with your words ...In that, I also see hope ...Do you know in the unfinished lines you are immortalizing the words and that is amazing...keep it up

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By Inmyredhead on March 08, 2012 at 11:53 pm

Wow... thanks for the kindest of words Uttam. Very inspiring!

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By Angie Alaniz on March 09, 2012 at 03:21 am

Thats a great poem. Its in perfect season. ;)

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