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Leaving

by D. Sager (writer), In the wind, January 03, 2012

Credit: s47
No shock on earth could ever start that heart again

The hardness creeps in like darkness at sunset

I gave love the last burst of my precious energy,

hoping to revive her before she passed on to the light.

No shock on earth could ever start that heart again,

growing cold as stone before my eyes.

The hardness creeps in like darkness at sunset,

first intriguing and beautiful, but then, a cold wind

blows from the darkness, night is coming.

One last chance I gave love, I started a fire in her,

using all the dead life I had in me as fuel.

Nevertheless, she refused to breathe.

Now I feel her life ebbing from my soul.

Her presence evaporating from my heart.

Left with the cracked parched earth of my soul,

thirsty for wetness, she refused to live.

Have you ever felt someone leaving your soul?

First written in: opinionsofeye.com



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D. Sager is a writer for BrooWaha. For more information, visit the writer's website.
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By Uttam Gill on January 04, 2012 at 09:53 am

"Have you ever felt someone leaving your soul?"...they go brazenly and I see the brutal departure and your passion of hope...In your words I read you infusing life to love and to be loved...Sager I can read that sincerity in you...your words are as honest as your faith, belief and passion…Keep it up…You write because you feel and believe in that feeling…Keep it up my friend.

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By amity_007 on January 04, 2012 at 10:26 am

Another masterpiece..!!!

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By amity_007 on January 04, 2012 at 10:42 am

I was looking at the tab of my browser.. It's showed like "Leaving - Broowaha"..... Your poem title along with Broowaha ... For once I thought you were saying "leaving Broowaha!" Was shocked..!!!

HA HA :D

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By D. Sager on January 04, 2012 at 12:57 pm

never happen...the competition is trying though lol...

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