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PURPOSE

by amity_007 (writer), Delhi, India, November 19, 2011

a short poem - a quest to find the purpose of my life

What will come of the mornings and days

Will Someone remember our purpose and ways

What about the moments we raise

the things we praise......

wat about the moments in pain,

the dreams in brain

Who will know them as us the same

if no, then who to blame

who will see our smilin faces

who will see those blushes

unfolding stories of far away places

how many before us have passed by

which set foot on sand we stand by

they too set their dreams to fly

and now a mist in a cloudy sky

we don´t know,why things are just like now,

but I believe

one day we will understand why and how

how one lost touch with life and dream

and still held on to a hope,wanting to breathe....

what was it that forced one to pen these thoughts..

the same sparks an urge to puzzle out the life's knots...



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12 comments on PURPOSE

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By Angie Alaniz on November 20, 2011 at 02:01 am

I believe the same thing.

One day I expect ALL of my questions to be answered and I'll understand them and why things happened or were and won't need any further explanations.

What a great day that will be and something to look forward to.

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By amity_007 on November 20, 2011 at 06:59 am

Ya... :)

Hope that day will come soon... :)

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By Uttam Gill on November 20, 2011 at 07:11 am

sheer brillance of a poet is depicted in your words..its outstanding

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By amity_007 on November 20, 2011 at 09:18 am

Thanks man....

Thanks for the appriciation.... :)Fuelled me to write more..!! :)

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By amity_007 on November 21, 2011 at 11:52 pm

THANKS LOVE HEALS... REALLY FEEDBACK HELPS A LOT!!!:)

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By Betty B. on December 03, 2011 at 08:22 am

very wonderful write..

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By amity_007 on December 31, 2011 at 06:59 am

Thanks Betty

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By amity_007 on December 31, 2011 at 06:59 am

:)

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By amity_007 on January 04, 2012 at 10:28 am

:)

not so specific about the favorites... but definitely, all here inspires a lot..!!!!!!

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By Barbara MacDonald on May 11, 2012 at 11:50 am

Beautifully crafted poetic analysis of life and it's complexities...well done.lol recognize this? Said it before and saying it again... :-)

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By amity_007 on May 12, 2012 at 03:23 am

said it before ???Ohhk!

THANKS BARB... REALLY FEEDBACK HELPS A LOT!!!:)

LOL

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By Barbara MacDonald on May 12, 2012 at 12:36 pm

Your welcome and thank you too...:-)

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