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Amazing Grace

by Angie Alaniz (editor), San Antonio, Texas, July 16, 2011

Credit: anonymous
Angel with sword

"Worry looks around, sorry looks back, Faith looks up."

Angel Gabriel looked into me

Blameful brutal blissful what did he see?

Careful chattel circle grew over me

Dandle to dazzle duple dribble

Factual not fable, can't fickle, be faithful he said

Gentle dear Gabriel exuberantly gracefully I said

Handsel you gave once with heedful Hoyle inside my place

Ordinal position from birth came first given by Grace

Primal factual came first

Sessional over, breathe sibyl, soulful is dead, he said

Whistling semantics came purple linguistics

I see

Easy, I said!



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Angie Alaniz is an editor for BrooWaha. For more information, visit the writer's website.
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7 comments on Amazing Grace

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By Angie Alaniz on July 16, 2011 at 04:00 pm

Thanks Cher, glad you liked it.

It was created to have the reader dwell on it a little bit.

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By MBJ Pancras on October 26, 2011 at 08:39 pm

Let's be faithful in the Lord. Good!

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By Felicia Stevenson on November 05, 2011 at 12:39 am

love the flow, makes me think about that article about writers creating melodies

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By kat822 on November 05, 2011 at 12:54 am

So jealous, poetry is something I've never mastered. loved it

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By Angie Alaniz on November 06, 2011 at 01:06 am

Thank ladies, you made me smile. :)

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By Betty B. on December 21, 2011 at 03:31 am

Angie very nice poem

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By Angie Alaniz on December 22, 2011 at 01:20 am

Thank you Betty, that one was written in a special moment. :)

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